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Gummy,the plasticity girl.

Chapter.2

銀行内は緊迫した空気に包まれていた。
「ほほう、どう”終わり”なんだよ？」
相手はたかが女１人、こちらは２人で武器は拳銃。おまけに人質までいる。
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Gummy,the plasticity girl~Chapter 1

Gummy,the plasticity girl

Chapter.1

うららかな３月の昼下がり。街行く人達の服装もここ数日は、厚手のコートやジャケットから薄手のシャツやカーディガンなどの軽やかな春の装いに変わっていた。
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Abigail and the Rats of NIMH - Chapter 23

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“Oh, it was nothing,” Mrs. Brisby answered shyly.

“Good luck at Thorn Valley,” said Timothy, “When you get there, try and find my b

Unworthy {9}The creaky wooden door opened.

Loki didn’t bother turning around at first, but the smell of white amber soon aroused his curiosity. He craned his neck around and jumped as a small child unceremoniously plopped downin fron of the bars, grinning ear to ear.

“Hallo!” Fyr said breathlessly. Her face was beet red and she was gasping for air. A fine sweat was beading on her forehead. “Wheeeew. That was a long run.”

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A few hours later, the four of us -- Tifa, Jack, Skall, and myself, to clarify -- were standing outside the outpost's hatch entrance. The sun was just beginning to disappear from the horizon, allowing us optimally low visibility.
For our assault, I had chosen to bring my combat knife, a silenced Kleiner handgun, and a few explosive gel capsules. Tifa carried her crossbow and what was either a large hunting knife or a machete, I don't specifically remember which. Jack opted to bring only her scalpel-esque blade, which she assured me would be sufficient. Lastly, Skall was equipped with a serrated sickle, another set of gel capsules, and some kind of SMG.
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As Abe and Mr. Hack were finishing up the badfic they were reading, the door burst open. Just behind the gaping hole was Mechamentio.

“I'm back.” He simply said.

“Why, Mr. Mechamentio713.” Mr. Hack greeted, as if addressing someone he secretly disliked, but kept up the face of nothing short of pure innocence, “To what do I owe the pleasure of your company?”

“Fanfiction Dot Net moderator Harold Hack, on behalf of bloggers and decent fanfiction authors everywhere, I place you under arrest.” Mechamentio said, his wrist shifting and causing a blade of pure light to em

Transformers: Inception- Prologue

TRANSFORMERS: INCEPTION

Prologue: The Introduction

Explosions rocked the burning ruins of Iacon as a terribly wounded Optimus Prime dragged his bleeding chassis out of the fallen architecture that once was the Iacon Hall of Archives. Crawling into his command post, he grabbed a ledge to pull himself to his pedes as he limped over to the damaged communications grid. Energon seeped out of a myriad of abrasions and threatened to spill more as he forced his weakened structure to operate under normal status while he could feel his sensual impulses starting to wane drastically. Opening a private channel to the underground Autobot base, he began t

Cyclonian Chronicles: A Forgotten Storm Chpt 2Cyclonian Chronicles: A Forgotten Storm
Chapter Two

The skimmers engines purred softly as the Dark Ace left Cyclonia with a small squadron of three trusted Talons, the hidden compass leading the way. Anymore and they would be noticed quickly by any skynights in the quadrant, which they didn’t need.
Time was of the essence here, as the Dark Ace was sure Cyclonis would try and increase the energy intake so she could do more things than just talk and lie down.
Cyclonis hated showing a weakness, and more than once it had come at his expense.
Yet he was just prized enough to stay her right hand man, especially in times like this.
The last

Bloodied Air - Part 4 [A Dead Space Fanfic]I didn’t even realize I could become so winded. It was apparent to me that, in this situation, it was no surprise at all. Hell, I could barely even keep myself steady, no-less hold on to the tool I now had to trust as a weapon.

Carelessly flipping myself over against the wall of the small compartment, I caught the sight of Sifty’s helmet shifting and collapsing back into his RIG. The sound of the machinery clicking and sliding were the only sounds in the room besides the heavy breathing coming from inside of my helmet, and now from my new companion’s open one.

“Sorry, boys…” Sift spoke somewhat exasperat

Unworthy {8}Yet another week wore on. Two Three.

Another mark was scratched into the wall with a bit of stone. 21 tally marks and counting, engraven in the damp, earthy stone, waiting for him to go mad.

Loki’s hands shook as he scraped at the rock. With the freezing environment, sudden haircut, and prison diet, he knew he was going to get sick.

It felt like his throat was on fire. Water left it feeling dry, like it was a desert soaking up every bit of rain. It only relieved it for a couple of minutes before he restarted coughing like a jerking marionette. When he wasn’t coughing, he was hiccupping. He felt rather stupid, but after about an

Search for the Plot pt. 15Chapter 15...

Ray's quarters...

Ray sighed as he typed on his laptop. He saw pictures of him and Abe just goofing off, drinking soda, reading crappy fanfictions, and just laughing.

“I should've knocked him outta the way.” Ray muttered, darkly, “It should have ended long ago...there's no strength left in fanfiction...”

“I believe you are mistaken, Ray.” came a voice. With a shimmer, a ghostly form of Mechamentio appeared.

“Mechamentio?” Ray asked, “What're you doing here?”

“I transferred a piece of my consciousness into Lunatic's computer when I was here last.” Mecha

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After the End Ch 6: Don't Look UpIt was a foggy morning. Dennis and Eric slowly made their way down the road, weapons in hand, looking for a gas station. It had been almost a week since their departure from Westwood, and the SWAT truck was running low on fuel. Dennis looked down at his forearms as they walked. The burns had healed, but left some ugly scars. He didn’t mind, he hadn’t gotten it nearly as bad as others had. Thinking of Tara caused him to sigh and rub his eyes, drawing Eric’s attention.
“You okay?” The kid asked.
“I’m fine.” Dennis replied. “Just thinking…” Eric hesitated, still eyeing t

Gears (season final)I decided to sprint to the targeted area, as it was quite a ways away. i was within 50 yards of the destination when my display lit up with a full spectrum in a quick flash. within an instant the patch i was wearing on my right eye was flung off, and i saw... what looked like a smudged spectrum of colors, and then i felt a blunt force.
when i regained my scenes my replaced eye wasn't working, i could hear a heavy static over my normal hearing, and my vision was blurry, but i was being dragged by the pegasus who had flown me in. she was still wearing her flight mask, and i could hear her.
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SGU: Infinite Ultimatum Ch1by ~sheesh1991-SGUwriter

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First chapter of my continuation of SGU, my fanfiction of SGU. This is basically a season 3 that I imagined up. Finished this chapter up while in Guatamala last week. Sorry about the intro guys, I'm not very good with that kind of stuff. Anyways, make sure you download it. It's way too long to post the text into the description. It's just...a lot...18 pages, to be exact. So, download, read it, and give me some feedback, tell me what you think. I will be reading your comments, so I know what people like about it and what they don't like about it, so that I may correct the wrongs for future chapters. Oh, and Chapter 2 is in the works right now, so don't worry. I'll try and have it done within a week or so. So, yeah. Read it, and give meh opinions!!! Oh yeah, and the preview image is temporary for now. Just until I find a suitable preview image large enough, and that fits the theme for my fan fiction.

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~Sunsfire Aug 17, 2011

for feedback do you just want artistic critiques or are you talking like editing as well?

~sheesh1991-SGUwriter Aug 21, 2011 Writer

Critique, anything you liked or disliked about the story and the storyline. Be warned, chapter two is going to have a MAJOR head-turner event happen.

~Sunsfire Aug 17, 2011

Thank You!!!!!!

I just found all of the save Sci-Fi and the lost shows pages this week, while I was looking around I found your post on Christopher Judge's page with a link to this story from back in July. Excellent work! I do agree that the stronger than normal language surprised me, not that I mind, it just surprised me, a little out of character for the show, but I'm ok with it. How will we know when chapter 2 comes out? Will you post on savestargateuniverse page when a new chapter comes out? I am also a member, but only since 8-15-11.

~sheesh1991-SGUwriter Aug 21, 2011 Writer

Chapter 2 is only 2 pages away from being done. I'mma gonna upload it today once I finish it.

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C'mon people! I need feedback!

~Waldo420 Aug 9, 2011

Pretty good. I like it. A couple of small things, Rush wouldnt have said "'our' decedents" cause he wasnt one of the ones who went through, he would've said 'your' or 'your others' something like that. I think also, while on the subject of Rush, that he was already on the road to belive that Destiny had its own consciousnesses, I.E. convo's with franklin and his late wife on Destiny's bridge. He knew then that images were not Franklin or his wife, but were being used by Destiny as visual representations for Rush to interact with. And while I agree that there would be more cursing if this to actually take place in our reality, this takes place in the stargate reality and we've watched and listened to them for nearly 2 decades so it feels contrived to hear them cursing. for the record Im not saying that about the cursing cause Im a dip-shit assmuncher who thinks that cursing is some huge horrible fuckin thing. I curse just as much if not more then the next shitbag. Im just adding my 2 cents. But the core story itself, I feel is strong. The way you unfold the plot feels alot like how they would have done it on the show. Many of the Character interactions are spot on. Im interested to read the rest. hope your still working on it, cause Im still waiting for it.

I hope to see Jonas make an unexpected return from the dead,(possibly with some bit of knowledge pertaining to what the L.A. is up to this time), and I think if your looking for a way to dial Destiny, that when Mckay wanted to dial Destiny from that one planet, they said they wanted their scientists to go over Mckay's theory first. Mckay was against it because he said it would take months for them to understand it. Well...maybe it actually took them 3 years and they are now ready to dial Destiny for us. Which would be a viable way to bring Mckay into the story as well. So, my review is, very good! I enjoyed it. It really does feel like SGU. Good JOB!! My name is Aaron Waldo, you can find me on FB and Im a member of the savestargateuniverse page. please make sure that I have to opportunity to know when you finish the 2nd chapter. Im into it. Keep up the good work.

~sheesh1991-SGUwriter Aug 9, 2011 Writer

Thanks for the insight Aaron! It was something that I really needed, lol. And yeah, I'm actually working on chapter two as I type this. I just finished a...holy crap, and almost 4 page development story for the Descendants and a new species. I've got some really big twists and some really big head turners planned for this chapter.

Something that I think any Stargate fan would love to see, some "HOLY SHIT!!! NO FUCKIN' WAY!!!" moments of the series, lol.

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